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Next Generation by FlakyFever
Next Generation
Here's my Mane Six Next Generation Ponies, it took me a moment to think of them but here they are.

Mayflower~(Big MacintoshXFluttershy)
August~(FlimXApplejack)
Violet Lily~(SpikeXRarity)
Adam Apple~(Cheese SandwichXPinkie Pie)
Issac~(Raised by Twilight but son of Trixie)
Jetstream~(SoarinXRainbow Dash)
Darwin~(Flash SentryXTwilight Sparkle)

I'll make bios for each of them later~
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Five Nights At Freddy's by FlakyFever
Five Nights At Freddy's
Just a quick picture, I just saw the new trailer and loved it! Can't wait for the new game and love the new designs!
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Hocus Pocus by FlakyFever
Hocus Pocus
I love this movie ♡♡♡ Happy Halloween~
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CHAPTER THREE: The Cheerful Monster
Hello whoever this is! I'm Salor, and i'm a jumpy, cheerful and excited 5-year old, i'm also a mutant living in the United States Airforce Facility or more commonly known as Area 51 I probably shouldnt be telling you any this as I have no idea who you are and most of this stuff especially is supposed to be top secret but "Oh well."
 Now you know and I can't change that. Right now im in my cage swinging on the tire swing they installed just for me in my cell, its pretty fun and great and so am I so having one in my cell just made sense. I wasn't allowed to watch TV so im usually stuck here to swing and make my own fun.
I've been here for awhile for as long as I can remember, and I have many friends here who are also mutants. Since your here I suppose i'll let you in on another secret, and it sure caught my eye when I saw it for myself. I saw a real life alien today! It was totally real and I saw it!
It came through the corridors late at night, usually most of the other mutant experiments are asleep but not me, there are too many interesting things that happen at night and I get to see it all. It was Professor Johnson walking in through the super strong steel doors protecting us from the outside. He was followed by a herd of different people, medics, scientists, officers, officials and inventors from different parts of the facility.
 I knew this would be something big and exciting, I watched on in amazement and looked hard against the glass of my cell to ty and see what was hidden in the crowd of people. I saw smaller feet shuffling in the crowd try to hurry along, using my extended sight I noticed one of the pair of small feet were green and had scales and only three toes.
 I began to shake with happiness, another mutant had arrived, I wonder if it was a lizard monster or maybe a fish of some sort, etheir way I was happy and eager to see the rest of whoever this mysterious creature was.
My tail began to flicker from side to side, as I tried looking closer, I finally got its shape and giggled, the poor creature was nude and was shaking from fright or the cool air. It made me want to run out and hug the creature, it began to turn yellow-orange  the further I looked up the creatures torso. I saw the head of the creature, it looked so beautiful to me with wild forest green hair and the eyes like a cheetahs with  bright blue orbs. Was this creature a feline mutant like me? I couldnt have been, along the sides of its neck appeared to be gills like a fish but then it had the scales of a reptile, I couldnt tell what it could be anymore.
I came to one final conclusion, this was an alien, there no human or mutant that looked like that...that I knew of of course but  still, I have never seen anything like in my life and i was intrigued to no end. They walked the creature into another room in the facility and it vanished from my sight.
 One thing I didnt take notice was the small boy holding her hand as they walked through, whenever she seemed frightened he pushed the others away and protected her. I recognized him, he was Professor Johnson's son, he only brought him over a few times to the facility but I knew most of everyones names here, he was a nice boy and took after his father in looks,but differed by having a large afro .
"Why was he holding her hand? Do they know eachother? How come I havent seen her?" I was battered with questions but I extremely curious, this was the first alien ive seen, I cant wait to it so many questions. I laid on my bed looking up at the ceiling, and smiled happily, I burst and jumped up on my bed jumping around and screamed with joy."This is so exciting!" I quietly silenced myself as I heard a loud growl from the cell next to me, I blushed and laid back down in bed giggling manically. "Sorry Wolfman, I didnt mean to wake you."

(Salor so far is my favorite to write about, she's so cheery and cute, she's somewhat vaguely based off of Pinkie Pie from MLP: FIM)

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CHAPTER THREE: The Cheerful Monster
Hello whoever this is! I'm Salor, and i'm a jumpy, cheerful and excited 5-year old, i'm also a mutant living in the United States Airforce Facility or more commonly known as Area 51 I probably shouldnt be telling you any this as I have no idea who you are and most of this stuff especially is supposed to be top secret but "Oh well."
 Now you know and I can't change that. Right now im in my cage swinging on the tire swing they installed just for me in my cell, its pretty fun and great and so am I so having one in my cell just made sense. I wasn't allowed to watch TV so im usually stuck here to swing and make my own fun.
I've been here for awhile for as long as I can remember, and I have many friends here who are also mutants. Since your here I suppose i'll let you in on another secret, and it sure caught my eye when I saw it for myself. I saw a real life alien today! It was totally real and I saw it!
It came through the corridors late at night, usually most of the other mutant experiments are asleep but not me, there are too many interesting things that happen at night and I get to see it all. It was Professor Johnson walking in through the super strong steel doors protecting us from the outside. He was followed by a herd of different people, medics, scientists, officers, officials and inventors from different parts of the facility.
 I knew this would be something big and exciting, I watched on in amazement and looked hard against the glass of my cell to ty and see what was hidden in the crowd of people. I saw smaller feet shuffling in the crowd try to hurry along, using my extended sight I noticed one of the pair of small feet were green and had scales and only three toes.
 I began to shake with happiness, another mutant had arrived, I wonder if it was a lizard monster or maybe a fish of some sort, etheir way I was happy and eager to see the rest of whoever this mysterious creature was.
My tail began to flicker from side to side, as I tried looking closer, I finally got its shape and giggled, the poor creature was nude and was shaking from fright or the cool air. It made me want to run out and hug the creature, it began to turn yellow-orange  the further I looked up the creatures torso. I saw the head of the creature, it looked so beautiful to me with wild forest green hair and the eyes like a cheetahs with  bright blue orbs. Was this creature a feline mutant like me? I couldnt have been, along the sides of its neck appeared to be gills like a fish but then it had the scales of a reptile, I couldnt tell what it could be anymore.
I came to one final conclusion, this was an alien, there no human or mutant that looked like that...that I knew of of course but  still, I have never seen anything like in my life and i was intrigued to no end. They walked the creature into another room in the facility and it vanished from my sight.
 One thing I didnt take notice was the small boy holding her hand as they walked through, whenever she seemed frightened he pushed the others away and protected her. I recognized him, he was Professor Johnson's son, he only brought him over a few times to the facility but I knew most of everyones names here, he was a nice boy and took after his father in looks,but differed by having a large afro .
"Why was he holding her hand? Do they know eachother? How come I havent seen her?" I was battered with questions but I extremely curious, this was the first alien ive seen, I cant wait to it so many questions. I laid on my bed looking up at the ceiling, and smiled happily, I burst and jumped up on my bed jumping around and screamed with joy."This is so exciting!" I quietly silenced myself as I heard a loud growl from the cell next to me, I blushed and laid back down in bed giggling manically. "Sorry Wolfman, I didnt mean to wake you."

(Salor so far is my favorite to write about, she's so cheery and cute, she's somewhat vaguely based off of Pinkie Pie from MLP: FIM)

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Teb1997
Artist | Hobbyist | Traditional Art
United States
Current Residence: New York
Favourite genre of music: All genres except rap.
Favourite style of art: Traditional and Digital
MP3 player of choice: Ipod Nano
Shell of choice: Does it matter?
Wallpaper of choice:Purple Wallpaper
Skin of choice: My Skin
Favourite cartoon character: Pinkie Pie,Mandy, Gaz, Zim,Jimmy Two-Shoes, Eileen, Rigby, The Powerpuff Girls and The RowdyRuff Boys
Personal Quote: Believe In Yourself.
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Cosmic-Crackers Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  New member
thanks for the fav :D
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Burnt-Butter Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  New member Professional Digital Artist
Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] Thanks for the fav! It means a lot to us!! Llama Emoji-39 (Eager) [V2]  
Please consider giving us a watch. Llama Emoji-56 (Hiding) [V3] 
Also, i'm the editor of 'BurntToast' and i would LOOOVEE to collab with you! Please lemme know if you are up for it!! 
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FlakyFever Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure I wouldn't mind, I haven't collaborated with anyone yet so it could be good, I like your art, its sharp and colorful :3
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InuAzuma Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Thankkkkk youuuuuuuuuuuu -hugs-
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FlakyFever Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :3*Hugs back*
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InuAzuma Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
we seriously need to talk more and stuff lol
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Thanks for the fav :)
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FlakyFever Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :3
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Renee-Moonveil Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thx for the watch~
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FlakyFever Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, thank you for the fav! :3
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