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CHAPTER THREE: The Cheerful Monster
Hello whoever this is! I'm Salor, and i'm a jumpy, cheerful and excited 5-year old, i'm also a mutant living in the United States Airforce Facility or more commonly known as Area 51 I probably shouldnt be telling you any this as I have no idea who you are and most of this stuff especially is supposed to be top secret but "Oh well."
 Now you know and I can't change that. Right now im in my cage swinging on the tire swing they installed just for me in my cell, its pretty fun and great and so am I so having one in my cell just made sense. I wasn't allowed to watch TV so im usually stuck here to swing and make my own fun.
I've been here for awhile for as long as I can remember, and I have many friends here who are also mutants. Since your here I suppose i'll let you in on another secret, and it sure caught my eye when I saw it for myself. I saw a real life alien today! It was totally real and I saw it!
It came through the corridors late at night, usually most of the other mutant experiments are asleep but not me, there are too many interesting things that happen at night and I get to see it all. It was Professor Johnson walking in through the super strong steel doors protecting us from the outside. He was followed by a herd of different people, medics, scientists, officers, officials and inventors from different parts of the facility.
 I knew this would be something big and exciting, I watched on in amazement and looked hard against the glass of my cell to ty and see what was hidden in the crowd of people. I saw smaller feet shuffling in the crowd try to hurry along, using my extended sight I noticed one of the pair of small feet were green and had scales and only three toes.
 I began to shake with happiness, another mutant had arrived, I wonder if it was a lizard monster or maybe a fish of some sort, etheir way I was happy and eager to see the rest of whoever this mysterious creature was.
My tail began to flicker from side to side, as I tried looking closer, I finally got its shape and giggled, the poor creature was nude and was shaking from fright or the cool air. It made me want to run out and hug the creature, it began to turn yellow-orange  the further I looked up the creatures torso. I saw the head of the creature, it looked so beautiful to me with wild forest green hair and the eyes like a cheetahs with  bright blue orbs. Was this creature a feline mutant like me? I couldnt have been, along the sides of its neck appeared to be gills like a fish but then it had the scales of a reptile, I couldnt tell what it could be anymore.
I came to one final conclusion, this was an alien, there no human or mutant that looked like that...that I knew of of course but  still, I have never seen anything like in my life and i was intrigued to no end. They walked the creature into another room in the facility and it vanished from my sight.
 One thing I didnt take notice was the small boy holding her hand as they walked through, whenever she seemed frightened he pushed the others away and protected her. I recognized him, he was Professor Johnson's son, he only brought him over a few times to the facility but I knew most of everyones names here, he was a nice boy and took after his father in looks,but differed by having a large afro .
"Why was he holding her hand? Do they know eachother? How come I havent seen her?" I was battered with questions but I extremely curious, this was the first alien ive seen, I cant wait to it so many questions. I laid on my bed looking up at the ceiling, and smiled happily, I burst and jumped up on my bed jumping around and screamed with joy."This is so exciting!" I quietly silenced myself as I heard a loud growl from the cell next to me, I blushed and laid back down in bed giggling manically. "Sorry Wolfman, I didnt mean to wake you."

(Salor so far is my favorite to write about, she's so cheery and cute, she's somewhat vaguely based off of Pinkie Pie from MLP: FIM)

CHAPTER TWO: The Lonely Boy

I looked out the windows of the car as my father drove telling me about his work as a scientist, though I couldnt understand most of what had to do being I was only 12 years old it still made him happy to know I was listening and I made me happy we got to bond. He hardly ever took me with him to his job unless it was necessary and ever since mom had passed we'd both been distant from eachother. Needless to say, it was better to bond with my dad than to come back after school to a quiet, soundless and uncomforting  home with no one there.
My dad didnt seem to notice as I shivered and pressed a small button to the side to close the window, it was cool tonight and I was so excited to spend time with him at his job i'd forgotten to bring a jacket. I listened as he talked about always wondering of the unexplainable like extraterrestrials, ghouls and spirits and how happy he was to be able to have a job where he could explore for such species and bring evidence of their existance back to be studied. I simple chuckled and nodded, I may have been 12 but I was'nt easily fooled, like superheroes I didnt believe monsters, to me it was like believing in the tooth fairy or Santa Clause.
We drove abit longer and Ieventually began to fall asleep laying my head against the window seal, I was nearly unconcicous when I head my dad shriek and the car came to a jerking stop. My body jerked forward and back against the car seat violently, I wasnt hurt but I turned to my dad in surprise and saw the look of astonishment and curiousity on his face.
"What is is it dad? Whats going on?"I asked him looking out the front window following his gaze when off in the distance I spotted an object out out in the fields. It had created a large crater in the field and appeared to be smoking and badly damaged.My father finally looked over at my=]e seeing the shaken look on my face and spoke"Son stay here, this could be a big discovery or a giant threat and I dont want you getting hurt." I barely had a moment to speak as he exitted the car with a flashlight and walked over to where the object was.
"No way..it could'nt be." I said to myself watching my dad get closer tio the object, I started getting worried, what if it was it could still be alive. I exited the car slowly and walked to the front of the car shivering more remembering the cool air, my head perked up as I heard my dad call to me. I walked closer and he got louder."Darwin, bring me the crowbar from the backseat! I think there is something in here!"
 I shook my head and ran to get the crowbar from the backseat of the car and carried it to my father with worried eyes."Dad, I dont think we should be doing this, shouldnt we..you know wait for someone to come first?" He chuckled and patted my head taking the crowbar from me. "Darwin, this is a huge find, this could be the first bit of solid evidence we could have to discovering and proving the existence of aliens, and we get the first look! You should be excited!" True this was his lifes work I still felt skeptical, so I backed away abit as he pushed the crowbar under the glass of the object and jerked it open.
 It opened slowly and my father looked inside with a surprised look on his face and smiled widely." Son, I believe we've found an alien..a real live alien!" He shrieked, I only looked briefly but looked away when the alien began to heavily and cough. Startled my father leaned in closer and I only watched with worry for his well-being. My father suddenly gasped and fell backward as the creature jumped from its ship and now stood on the outside of the pod observing its surroundings.
I took the chance to look at the strange creature, I was so colorful with yellow-orange skin that reflected like scales and long forest green hair that came to its shoulders and a strange shapely face  with..beautiful blue eyes. The moment I thought this the creature looked over towards me, I threw out my arms showing I meant no harm and spoke. "Please don't attack, I am not a threat...I come in peace?" I said nervously and the being tilted its head to the side, it obviously had no idea what I was saying to it.
I came closer with my hands outstretched towards it, and gave a gentle smile as it started to bring its hand closer to mine. Ipeeked off to the side and my father just stood there amazed at what was going on, he had picked himself up and looked alert in case the creature decided to attack.
When our hands finally touched I felt a small spark run through me, and gripped it hand tighter when I saw its sad expression. I nodded and smiled again  speaking softly and happily. "You should'nt be sad, you're safe now, in fact, you never have to be sad again." I brought my hand up and the creature flinched as I shook it hands gently."My name is Darwin, and I can tell were going to be best friends!"
The creature tilted it head again still confused but I only smile in return, it was so cute and happened to be my height."Be careful Darwin, it might hurt you." He said getting closer and putting a hand on my shoulder. "I doubt that dad, just look, shes just scared and confused. We should help her." I smiled again as she didnt take her eyes off of me."Her? Darwin we have no idea what it is or what its capable of. We need to get it to the lab to be examined first before we decide on anything." He said and nudged me toward the car, I followed and walked slowly gently tugging the creature along, it looked scared but it didnt let go.
I sat in the back with creature, it examined the car and surveyed it like a small curious child, I laughed and my father began driving checking the mirror every once a while to make sure I was safe. It was still holding my hand and rested its head against the car seat. I smiled and got an idea turning to my dad."Dad can we  name it?" Dad looked at me strangely."But we still dont know what it is." I looked the creature over again and turned back to dad."I think its a girl, its pretty like a girl, and I have the perfect name!"
Dad sighed but smiled lightly." Alright, what did you have in mind?"" Well in honor of her being your first alien and us being new best friends, how about we name her Abegail, you know after mom?" I looked at him judging his expression, he seemed shocked but then thought deeply about it."I see...I suppose that would be special..Abegail it is then." I smiled wider and looked over at Abegail who looked at me strangely."You hear that? Your name is Abegail now, do you like it?" Abegail looked away but then smiled abit and I laughed. "You like it! Abegail it is then."

(D'awww Darwin is so sweet, his name is and personality is loosely based off of Darwin from "The Amazing World Of Gumball"

Outland
By: FlakyFever
Date: October 2nd, 2014
CHAPTER ONE: The Stranded Alien
(Authors Note: Story is written in the 1st person point of view, and the first portion of the story is set in Chaves County, New Mexico.)
I awoke dazed and confused with a menacing headache at the top of my head."Was I..in some kind of accident?" I thought to myself. I looked around and everything was blurred but I could make out mostly metal and hanging wires. I tried to sit up but regretted it as the pain in my head brought me back down and I grunted in pain. I stayed down and observed my surroundings again noticing its glass cover and looked out seeing darkness with small specks of light as it appeared to be nighttime. "Where am I?" I whispered quietly to myself.
 I paused seeing a flash of light shine over the glass shield I was in and I braced myself remaining silent as the flash began to shine brighter and brighter against the glass, and I knew whoever was there was coming closer. I flinched holding my breath as a figure finally loomed over the glass and I heard muffled voices speaking in a language I didnt understand. I fell back and went limp closing my eyes pretending to be dead. I nearly sighed noticing the figure still didnt move, and flinched as a metallic object was wedged in between the glass dome from the outside.
 I froze breathing heavily as the object managed to forcefully open the glass container letting the outside air come through, and I began to cough loudly. The figure came closer and touched my shoulder lightly and spoke again in the language I didnt understand, I moved my shoulder  from his touch finally looking up at the figure, it was still blurred but I managed to take notice of his facial features, an odd looking being of which i'd never seen before.
 I was a large being and the skin of it was ivory with a texture that was similar to rubber, it had large dark brown eyes and had dark running along the sides of its face and the top of its head. Needless to say I thought whatever it was  looked ugly and sickly judging by its thin face and I  didnt wish to look at it further.
 I jumped up ignoring my injuries  and slapped his hand away before jumpping from the container, I looked around for moment seeing my surroundings and saw I was in a desert field noticing another figure that around my size. I looked very similar to the larger figure but was noticiably younger than the being I had seen earlier. Its stared at me with big curious eyes, though I was scared and had no idea who anyone was or what anyone was, I had to admit whatever this thing was looked adorable.
 It took a step forward with its arms outstretched and spoke gently in the unknown language, it seemed harmless and I found myself reaching out my hand to meet its. The being i'd seen earlier just stood staring in what looked like astonishment as we came closer to eachother, the fear i'd felt earlier seemed to fade slightly. Our hands finally touched and its face wided smiling gently, as he gripped my hand tighter, I looked at him with sad eyes, a look that spoke "I dont know where I am..I am afraid."
 It nodded as if it understood my feelings and spoke gentle words in the unknown language but they are words I feel I will never forget."You should'nt be sad, you're safe now, in fact, you never have to be sad again." It brought my hand up and shook it  gently." My name is Darwin, and I can tell were going to be best friends!"

(I apologize if this may seem odd, I had trouble submitting this as a literature deviant earlier, my computer is being a but so just stick with this for now. Again I apologize and have a lovely day everyone.)
Outland Cover Photo by FlakyFever
Outland Cover Photo
Ive had an idea for this in mind since middle school, I plan to finish this and color it later while also putting in the character Bios. I had a few other designs and still have another comic vastly in mind called Nick and Nick, I cant guarantee I will be able to upload both comics soon, just letting you guys know its coming. I hope it sparks your interest and i'll upload more MLP fanart. Hope to you like it so far! :3
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CHAPTER THREE: The Cheerful Monster
Hello whoever this is! I'm Salor, and i'm a jumpy, cheerful and excited 5-year old, i'm also a mutant living in the United States Airforce Facility or more commonly known as Area 51 I probably shouldnt be telling you any this as I have no idea who you are and most of this stuff especially is supposed to be top secret but "Oh well."
 Now you know and I can't change that. Right now im in my cage swinging on the tire swing they installed just for me in my cell, its pretty fun and great and so am I so having one in my cell just made sense. I wasn't allowed to watch TV so im usually stuck here to swing and make my own fun.
I've been here for awhile for as long as I can remember, and I have many friends here who are also mutants. Since your here I suppose i'll let you in on another secret, and it sure caught my eye when I saw it for myself. I saw a real life alien today! It was totally real and I saw it!
It came through the corridors late at night, usually most of the other mutant experiments are asleep but not me, there are too many interesting things that happen at night and I get to see it all. It was Professor Johnson walking in through the super strong steel doors protecting us from the outside. He was followed by a herd of different people, medics, scientists, officers, officials and inventors from different parts of the facility.
 I knew this would be something big and exciting, I watched on in amazement and looked hard against the glass of my cell to ty and see what was hidden in the crowd of people. I saw smaller feet shuffling in the crowd try to hurry along, using my extended sight I noticed one of the pair of small feet were green and had scales and only three toes.
 I began to shake with happiness, another mutant had arrived, I wonder if it was a lizard monster or maybe a fish of some sort, etheir way I was happy and eager to see the rest of whoever this mysterious creature was.
My tail began to flicker from side to side, as I tried looking closer, I finally got its shape and giggled, the poor creature was nude and was shaking from fright or the cool air. It made me want to run out and hug the creature, it began to turn yellow-orange  the further I looked up the creatures torso. I saw the head of the creature, it looked so beautiful to me with wild forest green hair and the eyes like a cheetahs with  bright blue orbs. Was this creature a feline mutant like me? I couldnt have been, along the sides of its neck appeared to be gills like a fish but then it had the scales of a reptile, I couldnt tell what it could be anymore.
I came to one final conclusion, this was an alien, there no human or mutant that looked like that...that I knew of of course but  still, I have never seen anything like in my life and i was intrigued to no end. They walked the creature into another room in the facility and it vanished from my sight.
 One thing I didnt take notice was the small boy holding her hand as they walked through, whenever she seemed frightened he pushed the others away and protected her. I recognized him, he was Professor Johnson's son, he only brought him over a few times to the facility but I knew most of everyones names here, he was a nice boy and took after his father in looks,but differed by having a large afro .
"Why was he holding her hand? Do they know eachother? How come I havent seen her?" I was battered with questions but I extremely curious, this was the first alien ive seen, I cant wait to it so many questions. I laid on my bed looking up at the ceiling, and smiled happily, I burst and jumped up on my bed jumping around and screamed with joy."This is so exciting!" I quietly silenced myself as I heard a loud growl from the cell next to me, I blushed and laid back down in bed giggling manically. "Sorry Wolfman, I didnt mean to wake you."

(Salor so far is my favorite to write about, she's so cheery and cute, she's somewhat vaguely based off of Pinkie Pie from MLP: FIM)

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